Interview Revision

Original:

During my interview, I hoped to learn a little about the experiences people had in the classroom at Belmont. I specifically wanted to see the impact that professors had on learning.

Everyone has that one professor that has made a profound influence on their life. That is one of the defining characteristics of the Belmont University experience. This school has some of the best professors. They are available, dedicated to the student (not just academically but also spiritually, professionally, and personally), and they challenge the students to do better work and to reach higher aspirations. "I love the faculty and staff. One of my favorite classes was Integrated Accounting. I like the material, but the professor (Beverly Alleyne) pushed it over the top," said Peter Smith, a junior at Belmont. Students at Belmont can also expect to have a relationship with their professors. "They relate to students really well and invest some time in them," adds Smith.

Revision:

During my interview, I hoped to learn a little about the classroom experiences at Belmont University; specifically the impact that professors had on learning.

Everyone has that one professor that has profoundly influenced his or her life. That effect is a quintessential part of the Belmont University Experience. This school has some of the best professors. Belmont has made the commitment to provide students with professors who are not only academics but they are mentors. They are available, dedicated to the student academically, spiritually and personally (not just academically but also spiritually, professionally, and personally), and they challenge the students to do better work and to reach higher aspirations. "I love the faculty and staff. One of my favorite classes was Integrated Accounting. I like the material, but the professor (Beverly Alleyne) pushed it over the top," said Peter Smith, a junior at Belmont. Belmont students should expect a relationship with their professors. "They relate to students really well and invest some time in them," adds Smith.